I am no music expert, so I can't give you sound advice (bwahahahaha). Definitely needs some level adjustments though. I dig the 432. Tones at this tune feel more rich and vibrant.
The tone of the song doesn't seem to escape the limits of the notes set in the first verse. Because of that, further in the song, the tune becomes less interesting (though still a nice melody) as it feels more like repetition. Perhaps this is your goal.
Hope you don't put lyrics to it.
Maybe this should be the theme to Westworld... but that would probably wreck the beauty of the song and make you infamous. or something like that.