wind noise, non-essential noise can be reduced/eliminated.
reduce foreground music volume when you are talking.
Jittery cam when the fact cats pop up made them difficult to read. fact cats blocking some beautiful scenes too.
Not sure what you are using to edit, but i'm wondering if there is a stabilizing filter that can be used to remove/reduce the jitters.
intro 'uuhhhhaaaaahhhh' part seems more middle eastern?
vid cuts and transitions were really good though.